The rookie put rock ya son between a rock and a hard place. Ha
I liked the breakdown and shows it wasn’t entirely Rock’s fault for the pass. Your presentation has come a long ways since those original podcast files. If you don’t mind some unsolicited advice, your VO audio could use a little tweaking in post. It sounds a little tingy on the high frequency end. I’m not sure what tool you’re using for editing but this guy is pretty good on teaching. And whatever tool you use, the principles are the same.
This guy edits on adobe. But there are lots of other good ones as well, just editors I know use this guy as a resource. Really doing a tweak should take about a minute, less if you save the profile, and will make it more enjoyable to listen to.