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Lawrence Owen
01-11-2019, 01:02 AM
https://fullpresscoverage.com/2019/01/08/indianapolis-colts-vs-kansas-city-chiefs-in-depth-divisional-breakdown/

In this article, I go deep into some concerning stats on both teams, and dissect what I feel is a game that can go 2 different ways. I do like both teams in this match-up. 1 is the most prolific offense in the NFL, with one of the worst defenses (save the pass rush), And the other is a top 5 offense, with a top 11 defense that has allowed the least amount of points scored in the NFL since week 7. Give a read, like, comment, share..please share...lol

Lawrence Owen
01-11-2019, 01:10 AM
there is a mistake in the article. My editor accidentally doubled a sentence and never fixed it when he posted.Just letting you know, that one is NOT on me..lol:p

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01-11-2019, 01:16 AM
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01-11-2019, 01:18 AM
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01-11-2019, 01:22 AM
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I've had 1000's of readers, no-one has ever said anything about it not being safe. it does use cookies. I also use an ad-blocker though.
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Lawrence Owen
01-11-2019, 11:00 AM
feel free to let me know. I do think if it snows tomorrow, it is very much in Indy's favor. Indoor team or not, they've practiced outside all week in the colts and cold/snow favors the stronger run team.

southside asshole
01-11-2019, 12:03 PM
there is a mistake in the article. My editor accidentally doubled a sentence and never fixed it when he posted.Just letting you know, that one is NOT on me..lol:p

You need a new editor - that's far from the only mistake, and I'm only through the first 3 paragraphs.

DrSpaceman
01-11-2019, 01:06 PM
Yeah there are quite a few grammatical mistakes in there

And I agree with what you say, but not a huge amount of new insight.

I would add I think the Colts will need a few turnovers as stops on KC to win this game.

I think they will need about 35 +minutes TOP and +2 in turnovers to have a chance.

FatDT
01-11-2019, 01:26 PM
I think an AP Style book would help. Get the mechanics tight, then work on adding your own personal flair. I am sometimes an ass on here but you are clearly passionate enough to write articles so please take this as constructive criticism. I minored in journalism, meaning I was at one time a journalism major but decided I didn't like it, and had enough credits for a minor after changing majors.

With the internet, the world is wide-open for writers. You have football experience and people are hungry for deeper writing that teaches them things about the game and their team that they don't know. If you get the writing itself tight and your voice is clear you can take yourself somewhere.

GBB could probably say more about this given his experience at BR.

Dam8610
01-11-2019, 01:58 PM
Yeah there are quite a few grammatical mistakes in there

And I agree with what you say, but not a huge amount of new insight.

I would add I think the Colts will need a few turnovers as stops on KC to win this game.

I think they will need about 35 +minutes TOP and +2 in turnovers to have a chance.

Not a huge amount of insight for us, but this would be a treasure trove of information for the casual fan.

Lawrence Owen
01-11-2019, 07:28 PM
I think an AP Style book would help. Get the mechanics tight, then work on adding your own personal flair. I am sometimes an ass on here but you are clearly passionate enough to write articles so please take this as constructive criticism. I minored in journalism, meaning I was at one time a journalism major but decided I didn't like it, and had enough credits for a minor after changing majors.

With the internet, the world is wide-open for writers. You have football experience and people are hungry for deeper writing that teaches them things about the game and their team that they don't know. If you get the writing itself tight and your voice is clear you can take yourself somewhere.

GBB could probably say more about this given his experience at BR.

I have been told that I am a bit of a robot when writing and speaking. My editor doesn't really edit, he just copies and pastes. However he is the one that is in charge of the published material, I just provide the write-up. I never went to college, so I admit I am not great at literature. Pretty much just self taught. (which is probably why I am a bit bland).

VeveJones007
01-11-2019, 08:10 PM
I’m intrigued to see how Eberflus decides to matchup in terms of dime, nickel, big nickel, and dollar personnel. Doesn’t it make sense to cede 4-5 yards/carry if you limit a few big plays?

Dam8610
01-11-2019, 08:31 PM
I’m intrigued to see how Eberflus decides to matchup in terms of dime, nickel, big nickel, and dollar personnel. Doesn’t it make sense to cede 4-5 yards/carry if you limit a few big plays?

Not in the snow, certainly.

Lawrence Owen
01-11-2019, 09:04 PM
Not in the snow, certainly.

Oh, no. If it is snowy, I would think only a single high safety would be used,..with cover 1 m/m used more often. I know Colts used Zone a lot, but M/M press in snowy conditions when it is cold and wet would be more beneficial.

YDFL Commish
01-11-2019, 09:06 PM
Welcome Lawrence. Great analysis.

I too believe the Colts keys to winning will to be able to control the LOS and establish a dominant run game, and to somehow limit Kelce to at least an average performance.

VeveJones007
01-11-2019, 09:31 PM
Not in the snow, certainly.

Flurries aren’t going to slow down the passing attack.

Lawrence Owen
01-12-2019, 05:43 AM
Flurries aren’t going to slow down the passing attack.

The cold can however. Not as much as that with snow showers. But when the ball is cold, it is more slick due to being less malleable. Plus when your hands are cold, your catching ability is lessened. QB usually throw slower, with more air time, and the DB's have an extra moment with the ball in the air to make a play.

Puck
01-12-2019, 08:40 AM
Not a huge amount of insight for us, but this would be a treasure trove of information for the casual fan.

It would be nice to attract some average fans to this board

Imagine how quickly they would actually learn football!

omahacolt
01-12-2019, 10:13 AM
Oh, no. If it is snowy, I would think only a single high safety would be used,..with cover 1 m/m used more often. I know Colts used Zone a lot, but M/M press in snowy conditions when it is cold and wet would be more beneficial.

I would be happy to play a lot of cover 1. I doubt they will though

omahacolt
01-12-2019, 10:14 AM
It would be nice to attract some average fans to this board

Imagine how quickly they would actually learn football!

Why don’t you try and lure them with candy? Or is that just your trick with children?

Puck
01-12-2019, 11:26 AM
Why don’t you try and lure them with candy? Or is that just your trick with children?

I’m allowed near schools anymore

smitty46953
01-12-2019, 11:51 AM
Why don’t you try and lure them with candy? Or is that just your trick with children?

That's how he got his wife :eek:

JAFF
01-12-2019, 12:04 PM
It would be nice to attract some average fans to this board

Imagine how quickly they would actually learn football!

I'm not sure the average fans understand "shut up fag"

Puck
01-12-2019, 12:16 PM
That's how he got his wife :eek:

Yep she loved my big lollipop